The article and summary are finished and available. Unless there are any major grammatical issues, I think we need to call it a wrap. I reached the point at which I was changing things, then changing them back, then re-changing them, … as people's well reasoned but often conflicting recommendations came in.
I don't think anyone had all of their input incorporated, but just about all of you who so generously gave the time to contribute will find some of your input in the finished product. (Even I didn't get my way on everything – It still pains me that such a large consensus compelled me to delete the part about the Republicans being bought and paid for by Wall Street)
I am getting to work on distribution, and have a couple of good channels working. I will keep you posted as feedback comes in. In the meantime, if the spirit moves you to write to your elected officials and either send them a copy, or direct them to it, here are a couple of links you can use:
They are more apt to pay attention to one of their own constituents.
Thanks again – I told you at the outset that the article was only the beginning of my Put Up Or Shut Up response. I will roll out the next phase in a week or so.
PS Can't hurt to educate your governor either: